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Mass. to hold eBay auction for unclaimed property
The approximately 1,000 items available in this year’s auction have a total appraised value of about $350,000, treasury officials said, but in the past they have sold on eBay for an average of 60 percent above their appraised value.
While the proceeds of the auction benefit state government, Grossman said the primary goal of his office’s unclaimed property division is to reunite property with those who owned it in the first place.
“We are always trying to get the property back in the hands of the rightful owners, or their equivalent cash value,’’ he said.
To that end, the state operates a website listing abandoned property that has been turned over to the state, and has also posted the list in newspapers.
An estimated one in 10 Massachusetts residents have unclaimed property, Grossman said.
The jewelry, watches, coins and other physical items represent only a fraction of the $2 billion in total unclaimed property, most of which consists of stocks, bonds or forgotten bank accounts.
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$18500 and a diamond solitaire ring appraised at $17000. The most unique piece of jewelry, and Grossman's personal favorite among the items, was the tiger pin, which sported diamonds on its nose and two natural emeralds. It was appraised for $1000.